Sorry about your frustration with Audacity. It’s interesting to note in the context of having read Moran that my main reason for using Audacity is that it’s free and therefore available to everyone.

Even though you are unsatisfied with the final product, there are things to be proud of here–the turn, as you note in your eval, of the conversation about others to the revelation that it’s about oneself; the fact that you’ve created a traditional story (beginning, middle, end or climax to crisis to resolution) in 2 1/2 minutes; the unsettled, unfinished quality of the conversation represented by the interruption of the cab’s horn.

Funny how, even though you didn’t not record yourself, your “voice” is all over this. It was interesting to learn that it was autobiographically rooted though that is not all that I mean by your “voice.” I mean, too, your concerns and even your syntax. Very close to who you are in class. A creative nonfiction, then.